The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flow chart illustrates the series of steps involved in producing
electricity
from organic waste.
Overall
, the whole procedure for a power plant entails six steps, starting with composting and fermenting methane
gas
and culminating with a battery for electrical energy storage
. Moreover
, the process requires the use of a number of specialized machinery, such
as compressors and generators.
The first step starts with filled organic waste (leaves, food scraps, etc) and water stored in the steel tank until 3/4 full, on
Change preposition
In
this
part the fermentation begins then
producing methane
gas
. Then
, the gas
will flow into four pipes that connect the steel tank and the methane
gas
storage
. After that, a compressor will help the methane
gas
move from gas
storage
to the combustion engine.
From the combustion engine, mechanical energy out and transferred to a generator then
Correct word choice
and then
process
Wrong verb form
processed
it
to Correct pronoun usage
apply
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
electricity
. Next,
A battery will be used for
a place for electrical energy Change preposition
as
storage
after the electricity
is out from the generator. Finally
, the electricity
is distributed for home use through cables from the battery.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, methane, gas, storage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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