The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts how many
people
lived urban
Change preposition
in urban
area
in four different Asian countries between 1970 and 2020 and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
predict
the future trend by the Correct subject-verb agreement
predicts
year
2030 and 2040.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it is said that the proportion of people
in Malaysia
and Indonesia increased significantly during the whole given period, while
there were some fluctuations in Philippines
and Thailand. In 1970, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Philippines
had the highest percentage of residents Correct article usage
the Philippines
lived
in cities and the highest number of citizens in Wrong verb form
living
Malaysia
will choose to stay in Correct article usage
the flourish
flourish
Replace the word
flourishing
area
in the year 2040.
Looking at the diagram in more Fix the agreement mistake
areas
details
, at the start of the period, the difference between Fix the agreement mistake
detail
Malaysia
and Philippines
was only 2%, with 30% and 32%, respectively. During the following 50 years from 1970, the figure for persons in Malaysia
soared to roughly 75%, relatively, there was also
an increase in Philippines
from 1970 to 1990, Correct article usage
the Philippines
while
it decreased to about 42% by 2010, then
it converted to a steady rise until 2040.
We can see that there were around 14% and 19% Change preposition
of folks
folks
in Indonesia and Thailand preferred to have houses in Change preposition
of folks
the
large Correct article usage
apply
town
, Fix the agreement mistake
towns
Correct word choice
and
however
more and more Correct word choice
and
people
in the two nations moved to more convenient places in the given period. The percentage of population
dramatically rose to 50% and it is predicted that it will increase to 60% Correct article usage
the population
as well as
become the second most people
lived
in the cities.Wrong verb form
living
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, malaysia, philippines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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