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Task Achievement
Make sure to provide a clear introduction, stating your opinion directly on the given topic. The introduction should engage with the topic and outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting sentences that expand on the topic. It should be easy for the reader to follow the progression of ideas.
Task Achievement
Provide relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments. This will demonstrate your ability to relate theory to real-world examples and enhance the persuasive power of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on sentence structure and aim for a mix of complex and simple sentences. This will not only improve readability but also demonstrate your linguistic competence.
Task Achievement
Address the counter-argument or potential downsides briefly, explaining why you still maintain your position. This will make your argument more nuanced and compelling.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
It is argued that college students have a responsibility to fund their own tuition fees due to the minimum contribution to society afterwards. This essay disagrees with the statement because people with a higher degree can help the government to create some innovations for a better country and increase the employment rate through entrepreneurship.
The issue of inequality has been the subject of heated debates for over a millennia. Undoubtedly, the idea that some people receive more than they deserve is not novel and is supported by many. This way of thinking has found its way into the field of creativity and self-expression. Many critics believe that some modern artists earn enormous amounts of finances while others are left behind in poverty; thus, this situation should be changed with the involvement of the government. This essay will provide an evaluation of the issue supported by arguments.
It is considered that the percentage of individuals dealing with stress is getting higher in many nations across the globe. In my opinion, the most prone to stress are the students and the main causes of anxiety for them are peer pressure and school grades.
The work-life balance in the twenty-first century is a trending and controversial issue among entrepreneurs and business owners as well as labour associations and organised unions worldwide. Many, myself included, advocate that weekly career times ought to be reduced and a more generous time off for employees should be granted for several beneficial reasons on both sides of the argument.