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Task Achievement
Make sure to provide a clear introduction, stating your opinion directly on the given topic. The introduction should engage with the topic and outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting sentences that expand on the topic. It should be easy for the reader to follow the progression of ideas.
Task Achievement
Provide relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments. This will demonstrate your ability to relate theory to real-world examples and enhance the persuasive power of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on sentence structure and aim for a mix of complex and simple sentences. This will not only improve readability but also demonstrate your linguistic competence.
Task Achievement
Address the counter-argument or potential downsides briefly, explaining why you still maintain your position. This will make your argument more nuanced and compelling.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
It is believed that when encountering unpleasant circumstances, either financially or professionally, surrendering is the best approach to apply. However, some people dispute about this idea and think it is better to try to change this unsatisfaction and so do I. Both views are going to be discussed in this essay.
As we know, music is an element of peace and many people are fond towards it. Some people think that music is a tool to bring people together from different backgrounds in terms of cultures and age. I completely agree with this point of view because everybody loves music. This essay will further discuss why music is a great way to unite people.
With the development of the economy, many merchants choose to use novel advertising to attract consumers. There are some advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
Whether men and women should have specific jobs which suitable for them because of different qualities they have or not is a controversial discussion. This writer believes that both men and women could train themself to suit the job no matter their intelligence or physical barrier and teamwork between both sexes would be more effective because of their unique characteristic, while some individuals think that men's body grows muscle better than women's while women are more crafty so they should do certain jobs.