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Task Achievement
Make sure to provide a clear introduction, stating your opinion directly on the given topic. The introduction should engage with the topic and outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting sentences that expand on the topic. It should be easy for the reader to follow the progression of ideas.
Task Achievement
Provide relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments. This will demonstrate your ability to relate theory to real-world examples and enhance the persuasive power of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on sentence structure and aim for a mix of complex and simple sentences. This will not only improve readability but also demonstrate your linguistic competence.
Task Achievement
Address the counter-argument or potential downsides briefly, explaining why you still maintain your position. This will make your argument more nuanced and compelling.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
Some people believe that scientific testing on animals is bad and should be prohibited, while others argue that such testing is useful for scientific inventions. This essay will explore that experimentation on animals is acceptable as long as it has significant impacts on the world and should be performed through alternatives, such as implementing safe protocols in experiments.
It is undeniable that public transport is the answer for anyone who does not want to become a car owner and wants to travel around easily. However, the problems they cause sometimes give us irritations due to their delay and uncleanness. In the following paragraphs, both problems and solutions will be outlined.
When it comes to advertising, the increasing prevalence of advertisements nowadays is attributed to both customer demand and the development of marketing strategies. I believe this trend is positive because it engages customers effectively.
In the current age of the internet, everything and everyone is online, because of this, it is almost impossible to keep any information private, especially when society is hell-bent on peeping inside one's life. The popularity of common people's vlogs is a testament to the fact that the general public is quite curious to know what happens in one's life. However, things get complicated when the person of interest is a politician or a well-known face, a celebrity if you will.
In recent years, needing for the woods has increased exponentially. Forests are the most valuable resources of woods , especially tropical rainforests. It is agreed that logging of the rainforests may lead to the extinction of animal and human life. The unthinkable elimination of the jungle has several drawbacks for living beings in the world.