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Task Achievement
Make sure to provide a clear introduction, stating your opinion directly on the given topic. The introduction should engage with the topic and outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting sentences that expand on the topic. It should be easy for the reader to follow the progression of ideas.
Task Achievement
Provide relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments. This will demonstrate your ability to relate theory to real-world examples and enhance the persuasive power of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on sentence structure and aim for a mix of complex and simple sentences. This will not only improve readability but also demonstrate your linguistic competence.
Task Achievement
Address the counter-argument or potential downsides briefly, explaining why you still maintain your position. This will make your argument more nuanced and compelling.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
Children are often innocent and unable to distinguish right and wrong, making some parents implement strict rules to ensure their kids follow common social norms from an early age. I partially agree with this point of view, as toddlers need to understand the rewards and consequences as early as possible, yet gentle parenting is also essential to protect children emotional well-being.
Many people believe that effort and discipline play an important role in achieving success in life, while others argue that money and appearance are two aspects that significantly influence one's success. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and drawbacks of this phenomenon and provide my own perspective.
I am Sakshi Kansara, and my employee number is 278976. I am writing this letter in regards to resigning from my current job role. The reason I am planning to leave is that my husband got transferred to Halifax, as he has got a good job offer, therefore we might be moving there soon.
There has been discussion revolving around the decline of educational standards in the past years. Some people believe that educational standards have decreased in the areas of literacy and numeracy. In this essay, I will look into the causes of this issue and present some problem solutions to it.