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Task Achievement
Make sure to provide a clear introduction, stating your opinion directly on the given topic. The introduction should engage with the topic and outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting sentences that expand on the topic. It should be easy for the reader to follow the progression of ideas.
Task Achievement
Provide relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments. This will demonstrate your ability to relate theory to real-world examples and enhance the persuasive power of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on sentence structure and aim for a mix of complex and simple sentences. This will not only improve readability but also demonstrate your linguistic competence.
Task Achievement
Address the counter-argument or potential downsides briefly, explaining why you still maintain your position. This will make your argument more nuanced and compelling.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
In this digital age, artificial assistants are being improved in other to replace humans in the place they work. In this writer’s view, robots will replace some professions. This will have a negative effect on the employment rate and society.
Studies have concluded that our personality and development rely more on the characteristics we are born with than any events that may occur and affect our lives. Even though our genetic background plays a significant role in our later development, it disagrees that they may be a greater influence than exposure to incidents or circumstances in life, and this essay will prove it.
Whether there should be any discrimination between genders regarding their choice of career paths or not is a controversial topic. The writer of this essay believes that despite the diverse perspectives offered when giving women free will to work as whatever they want, some limits should be considered due to the nature of specific jobs which require physical strength and analytical thinking.
In this contemporary epoch, producing happier societies is an essential topic to discuss and analyze at the same time that most people are interested in daily. In the recent time, this point is important. Otherwise, it is controversial. It is important to speak about the pros and cons of happier societies specifically in the richest and poorest people's earnings.