The two charts below show the percentage of films released and tickets sold by genre, in 1996 and 2000, in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the bar graphs display the

percentage

of movies that let go and vouchers sold in Europe, in topics

such

drama

comedy

fantasy

and

romance

in 1996 and 2000.

Overall

, the

percentage

of movies liberated in 1996 and 2000, had a major rise in

drama

gender

and the least was

romance

with similar data.

Also

according to

the

percentage

of cinema ticket sales, in 1996 the lowest was

fantasy

gender

and the maximum sales were

comedy

However

, in 2000 the lowest sold was

Romance

, but

comedy

was the highest at the same that was in in 1996. In 1996 and 2000, the most popular

gender

that was out was

Drama

, and the least making movies

was

Correct subject-verb agreement

were

show examples

romance

, with similar data by 1996 and 2000. But,

comedy

and

fantasy

were similar in both years.

According to

the

percentage

of cinema ticket sales by 1996,

fantasy

got the lowest score, compared with

comedy

, which was 20,

however

fantasy

got second place with an insignificant number of tickets sold. In 2000

comedy

rose one more time with a number over 20, being the

gender

more popular.

Change preposition

show examples

second place, was

drama

with similar data in 1996 and 2000, but

romance

by 2000 did not have popularity, since it was the least one

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

209 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

percentage of films released
tickets sold by genre
main features
make comparisons
trends observed
significant changes
genre popularity
relationship between genres
corresponding ticket sales
correlations or divergences
most popular genres
consistent popularity
emerged genres
marked increases or decreases
cinematic preferences
consumer demand
box office performance
film industry impact
notable improvements or declines

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