The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and me comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and me comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two maps provide information on the existing site of the current Norbiton Industrial area and the plan for future development.
Overall
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, there will be a massive renovation, where more streets will be added, and new housing will be built,
along with
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the facilities that are needed for the area.
According to
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the maps, a noticeable construction will take place for the streets. There will be a small roundabout added to the south of the existing one. An addition of two paths will be added, one among the two will be extended to the north across the river, and another will be prolonged to the north-west.
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, several facilities and other significant developments are made in the future plan. All factories will be demolished and turned into houses along the constructed streets.
Besides
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, essential facilities
such
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as shops, medical
centre
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playground
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and
school
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will be established based on the urban architectural plan.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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