The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart details transport preferences for young people in terms of
cars
, motorcycles
, and bicycles in the United Kingdom, the United States
, France
and Italy. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that cars
are more popular in the UK, the US and especially Italy while
the French prefer to ride bicycles. In all countries except the United States
, motorcycles
are the least common option.
Considering the statistics for cars
first of all, the United States
and the United Kingdom have identical figures at 60% each. Italy is noticeably higher at 75% while
just 40% of younger individuals in France
drive cars
. In most nations, bicycles are also
pervasive, with the highest number in France
at 47%, followed by 30% in the UK, slightly over 10% in Italy, and precisely 10% in the US.
Motorcycles
are only a significant choice for younger people in the United States
(30% ride motorcycles
there), and in
contrast
the figures for Add a comma
contrast,
France
, the UK, and Italy merely reach 11%, 10%, and 9%, respectively.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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