The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart details transport preferences for young people in terms of

cars

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motorcycles

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, and bicycles in the United Kingdom, the United

States

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France

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and Italy. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, it is readily apparent that

cars

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are more popular in the UK, the US and especially Italy

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the French prefer to ride bicycles. In all countries except the United

States

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motorcycles

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are the least common option. Considering the statistics for

cars

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first of all, the United

States

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and the United Kingdom have identical figures at 60% each. Italy is noticeably higher at 75%

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just 40% of younger individuals in

France

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drive

cars

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. In most nations, bicycles are

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pervasive, with the highest number in

France

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at 47%, followed by 30% in the UK, slightly over 10% in Italy, and precisely 10% in the US.

Motorcycles

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are only a significant choice for younger people in the United

States

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(30% ride

motorcycles

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there), and

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contrast

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the figures for

France

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, the UK, and Italy merely reach 11%, 10%, and 9%, respectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

172 words

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