The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources from 1995 to 2025

The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources from 1995 to 2025
The graph below gives information about the proportion of individuals that followed news through various options
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as
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Newspapers, the
Internet
, TV and radio between 1995 and 2025.
Overall
, what stands out from the line graph is that all the sources witnessed a downward trend, except for the
Internet
.
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TV had the highest
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at the
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beginning
of the period, but
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was the most popular way of gaining news
at the end
of the period. Looking at the details, as regards the
Internet
, the rate of humans who wanted to achieve news was about 0 in 1995,
then
it saw a slight rise
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between 2000 and 2005. After
that
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the ratio went up by around 55 in 2025. With respect to three other sources, they all had a falling trend. In 1995, the
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of TV peaked at just under 70 and the figure levelled off at approximately 50 in 2025. As for Newspaper and Radio, Both of them started with a little difference from each other at around 55 and 53
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and finished at just under 30 and just over 20, respectively.
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