The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development.

The bar chart compares the proportion of employees in different categories of employment in three countries.

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, working in the service

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is the most popular choice for Japanese and

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Brazilians

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both account for at least half of their working population. In terms of employment in Brazil, the proportion of distribution in the agricultural

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is as same as in the industrial

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, representing nearly 25% of each

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, half of Brazil's employees are distributed in the service

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.  To examine the data clearly, in Japan, the percentage of workers in the service

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remain

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the largest group, with 60% of the workforce, followed by the industrial

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and the agricultural

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, with roughly 30% and shy of 7% respectively. 

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, most of the

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Indians

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, with accounting for approximately 60% of the working population, engage in the agricultural

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.

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, the industrial

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remains the least preferred option, representing nearly one in ten of the workforce.