The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The maps depict information about the development in the
town
of Westley, between approximately Use synonyms
twenty one
decades ago and presently. Add a hyphen
twenty-one
Overall
, it is noticeable that there are a lot of changes. Linking Words
While
there Linking Words
were
a lot more agricultural sector in Westley in the past, there are a lot less greenery areas and there has been built both amenities and public facilities now.
In 1815, there were many fields located Change the verb form
was
to
the southwest areas of the Change preposition
in
town
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
area has been converted into Linking Words
cinema
. Add an article
a cinema
Likewise
, Lenton Woods which Linking Words
were
originally cultivated near Correct subject-verb agreement
was
to
Change preposition
apply
the
Lake Lenton Correct article usage
apply
have
been transformed into Lenton Housing Estate. Other amenities that have been Change the verb form
has
build
are Wrong verb form
built
Correct article usage
a sport
sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
and Change the spelling
centre
shopping
Correct article usage
a shopping
center
Change the spelling
centre
closed
to the Replace the word
close
housings
. Fix the agreement mistake
housing
Furthermore
, Linking Words
new
railway as one of Correct article usage
a new
public
facilities has been built Add an article
the public
to
the western areas of the Change preposition
in
town
these days. It is Use synonyms
also
interesting to note that Linking Words
either
Correct word choice
neither
market square
Correct your spelling
Market Square
or
Correct word choice
nor
town
hall Use synonyms
have not
faced any change at all.Verb problem
has
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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