The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The maps depict information about the development in the
town
of Westley, between approximately twenty-one decades ago and Correct article usage
the presently
presently
. Change the word
present
Overall
, it is noticeable that there are a lot of changes. While
there was a lot more agricultural sector in Westley in the past, there are a lot less greenery areas and there has been built both amenities and public facilities now.
In 1815, there were many fields located in the southwest areas of the town
. However
, this
area has been converted into a cinema. Likewise
, Lenton Woods which was originally cultivated near Lake Lenton has been transformed into Lenton Housing Estate. Other amenities that have been built are sports
centre and a shopping centre close to the housing. Correct article usage
a sports
Furthermore
, a new railway as one of the public facilities has been built in the western areas of the town
these days. It is also
interesting to note that neither Market Square nor town
hall has faced any change at all.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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