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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.
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The given line chart demonstrates the unemployment status in Australia in 2012.
Overall
, it is noticeable that unemployment in rural
areas
were
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 higher compared to urban
areas
.
Also
, it is important to highlight that at the beginning of
first
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quarter
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quarter,
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 there was a bigger difference between these
areas
wihch
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which
 was 2,5
percent
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per cent
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 in urban and 6,5 in
rural
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a rural
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area
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areas
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.
Further
 in
second
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the second
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 quarter
number
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the number
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 of jobless people in rural slightly decreased to 6
percent
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per cent
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 and in urban steadily increased to 3
percent
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per cent
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. During
next
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the next
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 third quarter indicators fluctuated in both
areas
, and in the
end
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 it was 4
percent
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per cent
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 in urban and 5,5
percent
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per cent
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 in rural
area
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areas
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.
Then
,
in
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at
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 the end of 2012 indicators of nonemployment in both
areas
come
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came
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 closer to each other, reaching 4,8
percent
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per cent
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 in urban and 5,2
percent
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per cent
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 in rural
areas
.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, percent with synonyms.
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