The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

The sketch illustrates the percentage of the population who were unemployed in rural and urban ranges in Australia in the year 2012.

Overall

, it can be seen that the figure for rural

areas

decreased.

On the other hand

, people who lived in urban

areas

lost their jobs.

First,

in the first

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the

number

of citizens who were unemployed was 6.5% and 2.2% respectively, in rural and urban places.

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period around the second quarter, in comparison, the figure for the joblessness rate in the urban range reached to point of about 4% of the population. Alternatively, the

number

of inactive people in rural locations decreased to the lowest point, presenting at about 4.5%. The time interval between

third

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and fourth quarters

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that it has become a reversed trend in urban and rural

areas

.

This

means that the

number

of rural spots increased,

while

the

number

of urban

areas

declined. The rural places had

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constant unemployment rate with slight fluctuations, about 5%.

Nevertheless

, the unemployment rate in urban localities reached

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highest point

at the end

of the period

with

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 about 4.8%.