Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

this

letter to get some information about the damaged

radio

which

i

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had

gave

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it to you a week ago. It was about a couple of weeks back, when

i

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got

this

radio

from your shop. When

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took it, the device was functioning properly but after some time, it was not going

well

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as it should be.

This

was because,

while

playing

this

radio

,

unfortunately

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my wife

has

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dropped it into the water. From that time it just stopped and

i

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was really not happy with

this

incident.

However

,

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know that it was my fault, but

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according to

the policy of customer service can you please

atleast

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at least

let me know why it is taking so long

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After 5 days there's a party in my house so can you please fix it as soon as possible or can you please replace it with the new

radio

so it won't make a

hault

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halt

fault

in the event. Yours friendly customer Jay Chawla