Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008

Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008
The pie charts above compare the proportion of people who worked in an engineering company from the perspective of professional areas and educational levels, in 1980 and 2008.
Overall
, in 1980, the majority of classes were
Master
Science
and first
degree
in Arts,
whereas
in 2008, the main groups were PhD
Science
and
Master
Science
. In both pie graphs,
Science
appeared as the major profession,
although
Arts got less than 40%. Within Sciences, from one year to another, the
Master
's kept the same percentage (29%),
while
PhD depicts a growth from 13% to 30%, and the first
degree
reduced from 19% to 10%. Concerning Arts, the first
degree
fell from 25% to 11%, the
Master
got a small augmentation from 12% to 13%, and PhD increased from 2% to 7%. In general, it is possible to see that the workers from
this
company that had
master
’s
degree
or higher level enhanced from 56% to 79% and most of these employees were from
science
area.
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