The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These two pictures depict the differences
of
two cutting tools from 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago, both in Change preposition
between
Stone
Age. There are a few noticeable developments, and Correct article usage
the Stone
also
similarities.
First of all, you can see the only thing that hasn't changed much, is it's
length. They are still about 10 Correct your spelling
its
centimeter
long. Change to a plural noun
centimeters
Secondly
, the later
one, Correct your spelling
latter
Tool
B has a wider outside than Tool
A when looking from front
view. And Add an article
the front
a front
also
, the younger tool
has got evidences
of being fixed and sharpened. Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
Next,
Tool
B, if you look at it from side
view, you can notice that it has a sharper edge and Add an article
a side
the side
thinner
. Add a missing verb
is thinner
And
Correct word choice
Last
last
but not least, Tool
A has a rougher back view than Tool
B, which is more flatten
.
In conclusion, both of the tools had various changes over a long period of 0.6 million years , but there is still a similarity.Change the form of the verb
flattened
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