The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the temperature on the monthly average in New York City in 2012,
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the bar graph depicts information about the revenue of bathing suits in the same city and year. Linking Words
Overall
, it is noticeable that the temperature averages have an upward trend. Meanwhile, the highest revenue is in April, Linking Words
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the lowest value is in June over the period.
In terms of the temperature, it was evident that the degree rates were low in the first month at about 31 Fahrenheit. Linking Words
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increased dramatically and achieved the higher point consistently at 248 Fahrenheit in April. Linking Words
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, the sales of bathing suits were Linking Words
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facing high demand, earning $25500000 in January. Linking Words
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continually climbed and reached the peak income of about $28000000 in April.
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, in the rest of the months, May and June, even though the average temperatures rose continuously up to 65 Fahrenheit, the sales of bathing suits decreased significantly Linking Words
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, only gaining less than a third of the highest income in the Linking Words
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, the revenue in June contributed the lowest value, with just $1500000 income.Linking Words
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