The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
The table and charts illustrate the police
budget
in 2017 and 2018 (in millions) in one specific area in the United Kingdom. The table demonstrates the sources of the funding,
whereas
the charts reflect its distribution.
Overall
, the police had more
budget
in 2018, as compared to the
budget
in 2017. The majority of the
budget
was used on buildings and
transports
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for both 2017 and 2018.
Police
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The police
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budget
came from
national
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government (175.5m), local taxes (91.2m) and other sources (39m) in 2017. In 2018, all three sources had increased to 177.8m, 102.3m and 38.5m respectively, made up a total increase of 13.9m in 2018. For
the
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apply
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spending
wise
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, 75% of the
budget
was spent on buildings and
transports
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transport
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in 2017. It reduced to 69% in 2018. In
constrast
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contrast
, 14% of the
budget
was spent on technology in 2018, as opposed to only 8% in 2017. The spending on the salaries for officers and
staffs
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staff
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remained the same for both years, being 17%.
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