Some people think that all university students should studt whatever they like. Others belive that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that every university
students
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whatever they like. Some people believe that every university students
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student
subject
that will be helpful in the future. I believe that each student Add an article
a subject
the subject
have
own Change the verb form
has
interest
and Fix the agreement mistake
interests
passion
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their choice, Correct your spelling
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Student
should choose Fix the agreement mistake
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the right
subject
to improve and useful
for Add a missing verb
be useful
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their career
career
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kinds
practical
.
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onehand
, the Correct your spelling
other hand
students
are
having Verb problem
have
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to choose Fix the agreement mistake
right
their
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the
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of their own interest and passion. So it is better to choose subjects as
of their own interest to improve their skills. They Change preposition
apply
also
have option
to grow in their career with what Change the article
the option
subject
they like and what subject
they studied. For example
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, the parents are Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
involving
in most time of the Wrong verb form
involved
students
life. Change to a genitive case
student's
students'
That is
the reason behind students
are living in
a jobless life.
On the Change preposition
apply
otherhand
, Some subjects have a good future Correct your spelling
other hand
such
as science and technology. In this
modern world, the subjects related to software and robots are more important topics. Because it has a great demand for students
after completion of their studies. And the work is transformed from manual
way to artificial intelligence. Add an article
a manual
For example
, In the united
nation and the Capitalize word
United
united states
of Correct your spelling
United States
america
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America
the
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apply
students
are having a
great demand to work in software development and in Correct article usage
apply
an
artificial intelligence. who and all studying Information technology is having a better Remove the article
apply
furture
.
In my opinion, Student should have Correct your spelling
future
freedom
to choose Add an article
the freedom
subject
and it will Add an article
a subject
helpful
to study with their passion. It Add a missing verb
be helpful
support
Change the verb form
supports
to
achieve Correct pronoun usage
them to
lot
in their career. Add an article
a lot
To conclude
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apply
this
, students
should have option
to choose Change the article
the option
subject
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a subject
whatever
they like. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Additionally
it should be helpful for their future which Add a comma
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subject
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