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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, last year

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, last year
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The bar chart illustrates an estimation of
illiteracy
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 rates in the world based on region and gender in the year before. The unit measurement is in percentage. As a starter, the highest male
illiteracy
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 rate was in South
Asia
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 around 34%. It was followed closely by Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States by over 30% and less than 30%, respectively. On the bottom, there were Latin American/Caribbean about 10%, and East
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8%.
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, the lowest is Developed Countries about less than 5%.
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, the highest
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 among females was in South
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 around 55%, followed closely behind by Arab States with over 50%. In the middle, East
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/Oceania and Latin
American
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/Caribbean accumulated around 33% in total.
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 place there was Developed countries about 2%.
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, the majority of the
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 rate is composed of females with its highest in the South
Asia
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 Region. The gap between both genders was high.
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