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This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map given illustrates how plastic
bottles
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 are recycled. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that the process has nine steps,
begining
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beginning
 with the collecting
disused
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bottles
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 and ending with the production of end products. In the first stage, workers collect the wasted
bottles
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 by using trash cars before transporting them to the factory. In the next step, these
bottles
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 are sorted to remove the unusable
once
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ones
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,
then
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 the
qualificated
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qualified
qualification
bottles
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 are compressed into square blocks.
At
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In
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 the fifth stage, a machine crushes the cube into small pieces before being washed, afterwards,
this
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 material is used to make plastic pellets.
Subsequently
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, after becoming
form
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from
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 raw material by heat, the re-new
material
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materials
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 are manufactured
to
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into
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 final items
such
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 as clothes, bags, and pencils.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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