The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The graph and table compare the use and consumption of water both worldwide and in two different countries.
Overall
, it is clear that
in the graph of global use by sector, agriculture is the most used and has increased more than the others. In addition
, the table shows that Brazil had more water consumption per person in 2000.
In the last
years, the three sectors have been more significant, but agriculture is the most remarkable. In 1900 it was approximately 500 cube kilometres, and the next century represented 3,000 km3 in 2000. Instead
of the others; industrial and domestic use have a less augmentation, with more than 1,000 and almost 500 in 2000.
Brazil has a population of more notable with 176 million contrary to the democratic republic of Congo with only 52 million. So, less than half of the first region. Besides
, Brazil count 26,500 km2 of irrigated land in contrast
to the Congo with 100 km3. Finally
, Water consumption per person substituted 359m3 as opposed to 8km3. Furthermore
, there is a very important difference between the two regions.Submitted by santos_dij on
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