The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water 

consumption in two different countries.
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The graph shows the evolution of the use of water in the entire world and the table illustrates two different countries and their water consumption.
Overall
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, we can see that its usage has significantly risen over the years from 1900 till 2000. It is used in three different sectors, the first common one is for agriculture,
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for industrial use and
finally
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for our domestic purposes.
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, the figures give us the consumption of liquid in Brazil and in the Democratic Republic of Congo.
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, agriculture is the dominant sector. In itself, it represents 3000 km in 2000 twice as much as the consumption of the two remaining sectors combined.
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leads us to see that far away we still have the industrial sector which spends about 1 200km, and
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the domestic purpose having a total of 500km in 2000.
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these two
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factors have always been quite close to each other in 1950, all three of them rose at a rapid rate.
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, depending on the country, the utilization of HO2 will not be the same. Indeed, in Brazil, one person wastes 359 m3 in the water
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in the Democratic Republic of Congo, she/he will only spend 8 m3.
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