The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport.

The line graph offers insights into the number of different five means of transportation used by tourists, based on the data collected in a particular country over a period of two decades (1989-2009). From an
overall
perspective, the most striking feature is that cars held the predominant number of tourists
while
the opposite is true for ferries. Meanwhile, almost all the figures for transport means witnessed an upward trend, except for planes. It is
also
evident that there was a remarkable disparity among the surveyed types of vehicles. Regarding information pertaining to the first
decade
, the figure for cars held the lion’s share at the starting point with 47 per cent before observing a growth of 15 per cent.
This
kind of transportation was followed by railway (39%) and airway (37%), which witnessed an upward trend and a downward trend in that order by tenth-fold per cent. Meanwhile coach enlisted the fourth vicinity and the ferry registered at the lowest position. Surprisingly, the convergence of the increase of coach and ferry, both by tenth-fold, was exhibited as time proceeded,
Nevertheless
, the data for the former moved with greater predictability, and the figure for the latter experienced a lull in the
last
five years of the first
decade
. As far as the statistic is concerned in the
last
decade
of the whole period, the railway experienced an exponential progression from 45% to a peak at around 59%.
This
number of transportation types was followed by car and coach. The figures for the former declined by 10% after a significant swell in the previous
decade
,
while
the figures for the latter witnessed an increase from 14% to 25%. The statistics for airway saw a downtrend drawing the whole surveyed time before reaching fourth place at 20%. The ferries registered the lowest position which was consolidated by a jump back and forth of 4%.
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