■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The
given
bar graph describes the Verb problem
apply
detail
of different Fix the agreement mistake
details
age
group
Fix the agreement mistake
groups
who
denote Correct pronoun usage
that
the
money to needy Correct article usage
apply
people
from 1990 to 2010 in British.
Overview, in 1990 the majority of people
give
money to charity Wrong verb form
gave
whereas
, in last
two Correct article usage
the last
age
group
the data was data for Fix the agreement mistake
groups
same
time period.
As per the provided information that from 18 to 25 Add an article
the same
a same
age
people
invest money to
charity work which calculates above 15% in Change preposition
in
former
given year and below 5% in Correct article usage
the former
latter
year. Interestingly, the data was almost double in Add an article
the latter
next
Correct article usage
the next
age
group
that
was around 31% and 24% in Correct pronoun usage
which
respective
given time Add an article
the respective
a respective
period
. Approximately 43% and 35%, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
British
Change preposition
of British
people
give moeny
to helpless Correct your spelling
money
people
by
Change preposition
in
36
to 50 Correct article usage
the 36
age
group
in 1990 and 2010 orderly
.
Moving towards Correct word choice
apply
rest
of things Correct article usage
the rest
that
51 to 65 Correct determiner usage
the
age
group
, give moeny
to Correct your spelling
money
people
with 35% in 1990 which was 5% more in
Change preposition
apply
last
year. Surprisingly, the percentage of both years was same
that was less than 35% Correct article usage
the same
the
Change preposition
of the
people
belong
to senior citizens .Wrong verb form
belonged
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