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The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the release of four types of movies and their
tickets
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 sold in the cinema in a nation in two separate years: 1996 and 2000.
Overall
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, more
drama
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films
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 were shown than any other category;
however
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, comedies were the audience’s favourite. Meanwhile, romance movies were the least popular in
this
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 country’s cinemas. In terms of
films
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 released/Out of the four genres of
films
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,
drama
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films
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 took the lead as approximately 27% were released in the year 1996.
This
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 was followed by
comedy
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, at nearly 20%,
fantasy
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 at 11%, and romance at 5% being released in that year. In 2000, the proportion of
drama
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,
comedy
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, and
fantasy
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films
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 increased, but the release of romantic
films
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 remained virtually unchanged/stable. With respect to sales,
comedy
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films
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 were the most prevalent, with 20% of
tickets
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 being sold in 1996. In the same year,
drama
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films
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 ranked
second,
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with approximately 16% of
tickets
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 sold. Romantic
films
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 witnessed a sale of 5%,
whereas
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fantasy
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 movies were the least popular, with about 3% of
tickets
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 being consumed. After four years,
drama
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,
comedy
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, and
fantasy
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 grew in popularity, with ticket sales picking up in all three genres;
nevertheless
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, the sort of romance underwent a sharp drop to about 2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tickets, drama, films, comedy, fantasy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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