The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the release of four types of movies and their
tickets
sold in the cinema in a nation in two separate years: 1996 and 2000.
Overall
, more
drama
films
were shown than any other category;
however
, comedies were the audience’s favourite. Meanwhile, romance movies were the least popular in
this
country’s cinemas. In terms of
films
released/Out of the four genres of
films
,
drama
films
took the lead as approximately 27% were released in the year 1996.
This
was followed by
comedy
, at nearly 20%,
fantasy
at 11%, and romance at 5% being released in that year. In 2000, the proportion of
drama
,
comedy
, and
fantasy
films
increased, but the release of romantic
films
remained virtually unchanged/stable. With respect to sales,
comedy
films
were the most prevalent, with 20% of
tickets
being sold in 1996. In the same year,
drama
films
ranked
second,
with approximately 16% of
tickets
sold. Romantic
films
witnessed a sale of 5%,
whereas
fantasy
movies were the least popular, with about 3% of
tickets
being consumed. After four years,
drama
,
comedy
, and
fantasy
grew in popularity, with ticket sales picking up in all three genres;
nevertheless
, the sort of romance underwent a sharp drop to about 2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tickets, drama, films, comedy, fantasy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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