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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart presents the percentage of
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population
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the population
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 in
whole
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the whole
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 world,
Africa
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, Asia and
Latin
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America
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.
Overall
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,
Latin
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America
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gets
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has
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 the
most
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largest
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population
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 and
Africa
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gets
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has
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 the
less
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lowest
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population
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.
Latin
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America
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 had more than 40%
population
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 in 1950. It went up 30% to 70% in 2000. It is more than
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whold
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whole
hold
 world
population
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. In 2030,
expectation
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the expectation
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 of
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population
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the population
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 in
Latin
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America
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 will be 80%.
On the other hand
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, the
population
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 of
Africa
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 and Asia got around 12% only in 1950. But there
were
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 a dramatic increase in these 2 places. They
thrible
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thrive
 up to around 38%.
Alought
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Although
 it
still
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is still
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 less than
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the whold
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whold
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whole
world's
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worlds
world
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. In 2030, Asia
expect
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expects
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population
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its population
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 will glow up to 55%, more than
Africa
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's 51%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, africa, latin, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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