The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate how
electricity
is generated by
wave
power.
Overall
, there are two ways to produce the
electricty
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electricity
which involve the tide of the
wave
.
To begin
with the process, the
chamber
is made near
at
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the cliff or the sea wall
along with
a column that
attach
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to the
chamber
. The first way begins with the sea
wave
that comes from the oceans which enter the
chamber
. The sea
wave
inside the
chamber
then
moves
the
air
to the column. After that, the
air
moves
the turbine in a clockwise rotation to produce
the
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electricity
. The process ends with the
air
goes
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going
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up to the sky. The other way to make
electricity
is somehow using the reverse pathway from the first. The
wave
from the
chamber
eventually
moves
back to the ocean.
Following
this
, the
air
from the sky enters the column and
rotate
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the turbine in the same direction as before.
Finally
, the turbine that
moves
by the
air
generate
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generates
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electricity
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, wave, chamber, moves, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
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