The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate how
electricity
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is generated by
wave
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power.
Overall
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, there are two ways to produce the
electricty
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electricity
which involve the tide of the
wave
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.
To begin
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with the process, the
chamber
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is made near
at
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apply
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the cliff or the sea wall
along with
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a column that
attach
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attaches
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to the
chamber
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. The first way begins with the sea
wave
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that comes from the oceans which enter the
chamber
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. The sea
wave
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inside the
chamber
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then
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moves
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the
air
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to the column. After that, the
air
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moves
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the turbine in a clockwise rotation to produce
the
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apply
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electricity
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. The process ends with the
air
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goes
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going
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up to the sky. The other way to make
electricity
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is somehow using the reverse pathway from the first. The
wave
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from the
chamber
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eventually
moves
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back to the ocean.
Following
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this
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, the
air
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from the sky enters the column and
rotate
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rotates
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the turbine in the same direction as before.
Finally
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, the turbine that
moves
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by the
air
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generate
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generates
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electricity
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, wave, chamber, moves, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
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