The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
picture
shows a process to create electricity
from wave power. The machine stands on top of a cliff or a sea wall and has a lot of components to produce electricity
.
As we can see from the two pictures being displayed, picture
A shows the wave going through the chamber and
pushing the air out of the machinery and causing the turbine to spin to generate Correct word choice
apply
electricity
. Picture
B shows air coming in again through the column and generating more electricity
triggering the turbine to spin in the same direction to power the produce
of Replace the word
production
electricity
.
Both images presents
us the same process to initiate Change the verb form
present
electricity
. At this
point, we can conclude that picture
B mimics the process of picture
A and both image exhibits the creation of electricity
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