In recent years, many governments have brought in laws to ban smoking in public places, such as bars, restaurants and offices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with banning smoking in public places?

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In recent times, there has been a significant increase in the number of

people

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who smoke. These humans can be witnessed everywhere,

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, the majority of governments have brought in laws to ban smoking in public locations, which means that

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can not smoke in places

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as restaurants and offices. I tend to agree with

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idea, and in

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essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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, smoking in these areas can harm others. What I mean by

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is that individuals who are dealing with respiratory diseases,

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as asthma, would get worse if someone does

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might get cancer, because they are in their weakest period and anything can affect them quickly.

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, you may cause these humans to die. Another reason is that you limit

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's freedom. Many are annoyed

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smelling

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drugs, and by doing

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, you force them to breathe the polluted air.

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, there would be arguments between the sober person and the smoker, which may lead to a fight.

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, in Iran, 40 per cent of the arguments are related to

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news.

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, some argue that smoking should not be completely banned. They feel that public areas like bars and cafes should have

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option for smokers.

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situation would be great for both sobers and smokers. In conclusion, despite the fact that

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can make some

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uncomfortable, some feel there

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be special locations for

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kind of

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as bars and cafes. In my opinion,

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thing should be prevented in

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places in order to decrease the number of them.

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