The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrate
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illustrates
the
hows Correct article usage
apply
electricity
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is produceby
produceby
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produced
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by usedgeothermal
usedgeothermal
energy. There are five Correct your spelling
used geothermal
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different
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steps
electricity
.
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noticeable
notable
first
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the first
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step
water
pumped
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was pumped
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km depth approximitily Correct article usage
a 4.5
on to
the well.After that, The Correct your spelling
onto
in
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apply
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well Correct your spelling
section
pussed
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passed
water
into geothermal
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the geothermal
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and because
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the hot
water
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is converted
water
. Moreover
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step
the production well pumped up hot Add a comma
step,
water
.
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fourth
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the fourth
step
hot water
goes on Add the comma(s)
water,
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the condeser
condeser
and Correct your spelling
condenser
conuert
into steam. Correct your spelling
converts
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and final Correct article usage
The last
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step
setup
atem
goes into Correct your spelling
item
generator
turbine powered by Correct article usage
a generator
turbine
and steam Add an article
the turbine
a turbine
electricity
is
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it
produces
.
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produced
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, The diagram show
data about to Change the verb form
shows
produces
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produce
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. There or five various Correct your spelling
electricity
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, step, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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