The graph below shows the number of university graduates in canada from 1992 to 2007
The given line graph demonstrates the data about the proportion of students passed out from educational
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of
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in
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Canada
canada
during the time period of 1992 to 2007
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Canada
Overall
, it can be seen that the ratio male
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of male
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while
the number of female students showed a fluctuated
incline during the period of 1992 to 2007.
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with, the proportion of men were
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a slight
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105,000 during the subsequent Correct your spelling
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two year
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a decline
pleatue
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pleasure
at
100,000 for consecutive two years (1996-1998. Change preposition
of
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increased gradually from 100,000 in 1998 to 129,000, where it surged up to Verb problem
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maximum
of approximately 149,000 in 2007.
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graph
shows that in 1992, the number Correct article usage
the graph
for
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learners
were
at 70,000 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
whiich
was moderately inclined to 75,000 in 1994.Correct your spelling
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in 1996 to 1998, the proportion of female graduates were decreased to 72,000 and 71,000 respectively.
The line graph for female graduates showed more fluctuation with Correct your spelling
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,at 72,000 in 2000, before reaching to highest value (99,000 in 2007)Correct article usage
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