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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in canada from 1992 to 2007

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in canada from 1992 to 2007
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The given line graph demonstrates the data about the proportion of students passed out from educational
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of
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Canada
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canada
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Canada
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 during the time period of 1992 to 2007
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, it can be seen that the ratio
male
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of male
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 graduates
were
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increased gradually
while
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 the number of female students showed a
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 incline during the period of 1992 to 2007.
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 with, the proportion of men
were
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stood at 99,000 in 1992.
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slight
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a slight
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 increase
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up to
 105,000 during the subsequent
two year
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 period (1994).
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 it showed
decline
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 to reach a
pleatue
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pleasure
 state
at
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of
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 100,000 for consecutive two years (1996-1998.
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 it
got
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increased gradually from 100,000 in 1998 to 129,000, where it surged up to
maximum
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a maximum
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 of approximately 149,000 in 2007. Moving
to
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the next data in
graph
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the graph
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 shows that in 1992, the number
for
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of
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 women
learner's
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learners
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were
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was
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 at 70,000
whiich
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which
 was moderately inclined to 75,000 in 1994.
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Howbeit
 in 1996 to 1998, the proportion of female graduates were decreased to 72,000 and 71,000 respectively. The line graph for female graduates showed more fluctuation with
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,at 72,000 in 2000, before reaching to highest value (99,000 in 2007)
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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