“Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

role

of parenthood should be equal,

mothers

deciding to have the baby, often leads to them controlling how the

child

is brought up. It is agreed that both

parents

have crucial

roles

but ultimately the

mother

has the most

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mother

and father's

influence

is crucial on an offspring, but generally,

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have the most responsibility in the

child

's upbringing and spend most of the time with them.

Firstly

, it's agreed that within the patriarchal hierarchy, the

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obligation is to essentially raise the

child

, making

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of decisions, regarding their upbringing.

For instance

, the man is the provider, who usually takes care of the financial aspects of the

child

's life, whether the

women

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often stays home, spending

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of their time with the

child

, ultimately taking

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the

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upbringing.

For example

,

mothers

are exposed to their

child

more often, compared to the father, suggesting they may have more of an

influence

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child

.

On the other hand

, society is developing and the distinctive

roles

of

parents

are starting to change, meaning the set

roles

may be reversed. Another reason why I agree that the motherhood

role

is more dominant compared to the fatherhood

role

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is that the

mother

teaches the

child

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and respect, teaching them wrong from right.

For example

, when the

child

is behaving correctly; the

mother

may praise them, and punish them for wrong-doing, essentially influencing them. Ultimately

this

shows that the

mother

is the primary parent, responsible for the

child

.

However

, it may be argued that both

parents

have some degree of

influence

, and the environment

also

has a huge impact. In conclusion, within society, motherhood is essential in a

child

's development, having

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of the responsibility. As they spend most of their time with the

child

, they

influence

their character and education, almost mirroring them. In my opinion, both

parents

have very important

roles

but ultimately,

mothers

have the most responsibility on the

child

.