“Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of parenthood should be equal,

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deciding to have the baby, often leads to them controlling how the

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is brought up. It is agreed that both

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have crucial

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but ultimately the

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has the most

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and father's

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is crucial on an offspring, but generally,

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have the most responsibility in the

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's upbringing and spend most of the time with them.

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, it's agreed that within the patriarchal hierarchy, the

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obligation is to essentially raise the

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, making

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of decisions, regarding their upbringing.

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, the man is the provider, who usually takes care of the financial aspects of the

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's life, whether the

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often stays home, spending

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of their time with the

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, ultimately taking

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upbringing.

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,

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are exposed to their

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more often, compared to the father, suggesting they may have more of an

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, society is developing and the distinctive

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of

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are starting to change, meaning the set

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may be reversed. Another reason why I agree that the motherhood

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is more dominant compared to the fatherhood

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is that the

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teaches the

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and respect, teaching them wrong from right.

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, when the

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is behaving correctly; the

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may praise them, and punish them for wrong-doing, essentially influencing them. Ultimately

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shows that the

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is the primary parent, responsible for the

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.

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, it may be argued that both

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have some degree of

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, and the environment

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has a huge impact. In conclusion, within society, motherhood is essential in a

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's development, having

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of the responsibility. As they spend most of their time with the

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, they

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their character and education, almost mirroring them. In my opinion, both

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have very important

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but ultimately,

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have the most responsibility on the

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.