Many
sports
are dangerous and many
people
guess that
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should prohibit dangerous athletics,
while
others think it is
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right to choose any things or activities. In my opinion, government should
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for the best option between these two arguments.
However
,
this
essay believes dangerous athletics should not be banned and the
sportChange the noun form
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ministry should make a regulation to do
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harmful
sports
.
First and foremost, all
sports
in the world
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their
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side which
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can
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injury if we only play it without
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about the information
ofChange preposition
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that
sport
.
Nevertheless
, many
people
still love that kind of
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. Some
people
believesChange the verb form
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that
sport
will increase our adrenaline and it
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better than doing
a Correct the article-noun agreement
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negative things.
For instance
, jumping,
this
sport
should you to jump from the highest
place
to the lowest
place
. It used to play in
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area and you should bring the safety things called
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parachuteFix the agreement mistake
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.
Hence
,
this
sport
is really dangerous if you do not have any
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at all,
that is
why you have to practise more and if
this
is your first time
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it, there will be a person who accompany you during the jump.
Meanwhile, simple
sports
such
as running, basketball, football and
have their
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side too. For illustrates, you are not doing a warming up in the beginning. It will make your
muscleFix the agreement mistake
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and the probability of getting
injuryReplace the word
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is really high. Another example,
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you are running in the streets which
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of transportation, the possibility of getting
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is too high.
Therefore
, the
governmentChange noun form
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role is extremely important.
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first,
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sportChange the noun form
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ministry
haveChange the verb form
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to make a regulation that includes terms and
conditionFix the agreement mistake
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to do
thatCorrect determiner usage
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sports
.
Additionally
, they should make a
place
like
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centre
whichChange preposition
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people
can do any
sports
inChange preposition
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
Then
, the government must publish and socialize that information through social media.
In conclusion, all
sports
hasChange the verb form
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their own risk,
consequently
, the
sports
minister must give
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instructionFix the agreement mistake
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to the community and
builtWrong verb form
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a
place
for doing athletics
while
the society should pay attention to their own health.