The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019.
The pie chart gives information regarding the outcome and
income
financial of the organization
of Kazakh Charity in 2019. Overall
, revenue
sources and expenditures have a similar proportions
which is dominated by one factor that contributed over 80% of the total proportion.
Both Correct the article-noun agreement
a similar proportion
similar proportions
revenue
resources and expenditures are dominated by one sector that provides a big proportion over
80%. In Change preposition
of over
revenue
sources, donated food contributed a huge number namely 86,6%, whereas
in expenditure is shown that program services spent money most, it was proven by percentage at 95,8%.
In addition
, Kazakh Charity organizations also
received income
from other sectors such
as community distributions and program revenue
of about 2%-10%. Then
factors such
as investment income
, government grants and other kinds of income
also
supported Kazakh Charity Organization
at under 1%.
In addition
, even though majority
money of the Correct article usage
the majority
organization
is used for program services, there are still other factors that require Organization
money. Those factors are Fundraising and Management and General with numbers 2,6% and 1,6% from total expenditure.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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