The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and theproportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and theproportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram represents the various levels of post-school qualifications in Australia
according to
gender in 1999.
Overall
, mostly all males have a skilled vocational
diploma
, there were about 90% of them
while
around 10% of women only had that degree.
Also
, almost 70% of females had an undergraduate
diploma
in 1999 and it was the highest of women's involvement whilst only 35-40% of men had it. It can be seen that a bachelor’s degree was allocated nearly the same proportion between the two genders (females and males) with nearly 53% and 47% respectively.
Furthermore
, there were the same percentages, but with different qualifications at 70% for men (postgraduate
diploma
) and women (undergraduate
diploma
). In the middle of popularity for females and males was a master’s degree with 40% and 60% respectively. In 1999 the least famous qualification for female graduates was a skilled vocational
diploma
at 10-15%
whereas
for guys the irrelevant level of post-school qualification was an undergraduate
diploma
with approximately 35%.
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