The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The plans above illustrate the differences between a
student
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accommodation house in 2010 and today.
Overall
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, the main changes to the building
is
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are
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the expansion and renovation of the house, with the addition and removal of several rooms and facilities. In 2010, the main entrance was on the bottom left, which leads to a
hallway
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. On the left side of the
hallway
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, there is a
student
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bedroom
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and a bathroom. On the right side of the building, there are 2 other
student
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bedrooms and a kitchen. Next to a
bedroom
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, there is a living room.
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, the outside of the house is surrounded by 3 gardens. There
are
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were
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some changes in the structure of the building in 2010 and now. There were no changes to the main entrance. The en-suite room is added
at the end
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of the
hallway
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and can be accessed via the
student
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bedroom
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. On the left side of the
hallway
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, similar to 2010, there is a bathroom and another
bedroom
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. The kitchen will
also
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function as a social place for students to entertain.
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, a garden is removed and a
student
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bedroom
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is added. On the bottom, the garden is replaced by a car park.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words student, hallway, bedroom with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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