The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The plans above illustrate the differences between a
student
accommodation house in 2010 and today. Overall
, the main changes to the building is
the expansion and renovation of the house, with the addition and removal of several rooms and facilities.
In 2010, the main entrance was on the bottom left, which leads to a Change the verb form
are
hallway
. On the left side of the hallway
, there is a student
bedroom
and a bathroom. On the right side of the building, there are 2 other student
bedrooms and a kitchen. Next to a bedroom
, there is a living room. Additionally
, the outside of the house is surrounded by 3 gardens.
There are
some changes in the structure of the building in 2010 and now. There were no changes to the main entrance. The en-suite room is added Wrong verb form
were
at the end
of the hallway
and can be accessed via the student
bedroom
. On the left side of the hallway
, similar to 2010, there is a bathroom and another bedroom
. The kitchen will also
function as a social place for students to entertain. Additionally
, a garden is removed and a student
bedroom
is added. On the bottom, the garden is replaced by a car park.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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