The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.

The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts compare the level of England's pupils' abilities to use foreign
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in
10-year
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the 10-year
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period between 2000 and 2010.
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, it can be seen that Spanish took the largest amount in both years compared,
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the rest of
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or dropped, and some remained steady. In 2000, Spanish-speaking intellectuals stand first with a total number of 30%, followed by the 20% amount of students who neither speak other dialects.
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, French and another language took merely 15% as the third most popular
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the pupils utilize,
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German and two other
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were the lowest. Over time, people who went to
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phenomenon is depicted by the 2010 diagram where the average of students that didn't master any language decreased by half of the
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number (10%) and almost each of the categories increased its level by 5 to 10 per cent, only German remained the same.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • proficiency
  • linguistic diversity
  • polyglot
  • language acquisition
  • second language (L2)
  • foreign language
  • fluency
  • working knowledge
  • mother tongue
  • language competence
  • language decline
  • cultural exchange
  • global language
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