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The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015

The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015
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The data depicts the proportion of
land
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 covered by
forest
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 in four countries, which is Australia, New Zealand,
Brazil
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, and Chile, in 1990, and 2005, and the estimation figures for 2015.
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, it can be seen that
land
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 covered by
forest
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 in Australia and
Brazil
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 decreased in two and half decades
while
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 New Zealand and Chile rose.
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, from the table, it can be seen that the biggest drop difference in
land
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 coverage was in
Brazil
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 which plunged from 62.2% in 1990 to 57.3% in 2005 and is predicted to keep falling in the
year
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 2015 by 3.7%. Meanwhile, New Zealand's
land
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 coverage had dramatically increased from 28.8% in the
year
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 1990 and would keep an uplift to 32.3% in 2015.
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,
according to
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 the information given, the highest percentage of
land
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 covered by
forest
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 throughout the years held by
Brazil
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was 62.2% in the
year
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 1990.
Whereas
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, the least region that has
land
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 covered by
forest
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 was Australia which was calculated to be 20.0% in the
year
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 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, forest, brazil, year with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deforestation
  • Afforestation
  • Reforestation
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Conservation
  • Sustainable development
  • Deforestation rate
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic growth
  • Land use
  • Climate change
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Natural resources
  • Forest conservation policies
  • Barren land
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Renewable resources
  • Ecological footprint
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