The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The graph details the
consumption
of junk food for teens in Australia over a 25
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25-year
year
period, between 1975 and 2000.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the consumption
of fish
and chips
declined over the provided period, whereas
the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased.
In 1975, the most popular junk food with
Australian Change preposition
among
adolescent
was Fix the agreement mistake
adolescents
fish
and chips
, being eaten 100 times a year
. This
was far higher than pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a year
. However
, apart from a brief rise again 1980 to 1985, the consumption
of fish
and chips
gradually declined over the 25
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25-year
year
timescale to finish at just under 40 in 2000.
In sharp contrast to this
, teenagers ate the other two fast foods at much
higher level. Pizza Add an article
a much
consumption
increased gradually until it overtook the consumption
of fish
and chips
in 1990. It then
levelled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten increased sharply throughout the 70's
and Change noun form
70s
80's
, exceeding that of Change noun form
80s
fish
and chips
in 1985. It finished at the same level as fish
and chips
began, with a consumption
of 100 times a year
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