The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The graph details the
consumption
of junk food for teens in Australia over a
25
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year
period, between 1975 and 2000. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the
consumption
of
fish
and
chips
declined over the provided period,
whereas
the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased. In 1975, the most popular junk food
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Australian
adolescent
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was
fish
and
chips
, being eaten 100 times a
year
.
This
was far higher than pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a
year
.
However
, apart from a brief rise again 1980 to 1985, the
consumption
of
fish
and
chips
gradually declined over the
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year
timescale to finish at just under 40 in 2000. In sharp contrast to
this
, teenagers ate the other two fast foods at
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higher level. Pizza
consumption
increased gradually until it overtook the
consumption
of
fish
and
chips
in 1990. It
then
levelled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten increased sharply throughout the
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and
80's
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, exceeding that of
fish
and
chips
in 1985. It finished at the same level as
fish
and
chips
began, with a
consumption
of 100 times a
year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, year, fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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