It is obvious that there are several working cultures these days.
Although
some people believe that work is the first priority in their life, I believe that to some extent we should be
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about our hobbies and interests
besides
jobs.
The majority of people who are
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their productive age often spend most of their time
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their
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.
This
is because work is their self-satisfaction, they
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passionate about their fields and have
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desire to achieve their dreams.
For example
, they sacrifice years to enhance their capabilities until get
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a senior manager.
Moreover
, some of them have
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to
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their families. To illustrate
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children
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needs
such
as tuition fees of their siblings, and living costs.
As a result
, they have no choice and focus on gaining money
instead
.
On the other hand
, several employees argue that doing hobbies is a paramount thing rather than work. One justification given is that working is only for
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and it
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not give them happiness and
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.
Thus
, they will use their
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to
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their interests
likewise
bicycling, reading, and hiking.
In addition
, they try to balance
this
hustle culture trend by maintaining their well-being.
For instance
, when workers feel
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at their companies, as simple as watching
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is a pleasure for them.
In conclusion, despite only prioritizing our career, we cannot deny that we should have an awareness to provide our body
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good rest and entertainment in order to achieve a better quality of life for societies.