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The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
demonstartes
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demonstrates
 statistics of
a
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 demographic situation in
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different regions all over the world,
also
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 with a prediction for
2050
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 year. It is evident from the data that, there is an increase
of
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 human
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. Especially it can be seen in the example of Africa,
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population
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the population
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 grew from 9 to 13
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percent
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,
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 and
even
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 expected to increase
for
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percent
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.
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,
world
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population
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 more than doubled,
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, it is estimated that humanity will
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from
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 9 billion people in the future. It is interesting to note that among all regions only
africa
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Africa
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 will steadily increase in
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a number
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 of people, starting from 9
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percent
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per cent
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 and expected to have 20
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percent
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per cent
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. On
other
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the other
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 hand, In
asia
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Asia
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 was a peak in 2000, which
predicted
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 to be followed by a small decline. 22
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percent
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per cent
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 of
all
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the
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 human
population
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 was in
europe
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Europe
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 in 1950,
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however
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 it had
decresed
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decreased
for
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by
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 10
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percent
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per cent
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 by 2000. Both Latin America and Oceania had
incline
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an incline
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 in
population
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,
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 but
prognosed
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proposed
 to remain the same as in 2000.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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