The maps bellow show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps demonstrate recent changes in the town of Kimsville from 2002 until now.

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, There has been a

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significant

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modernization

and more amenities

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been added. One interesting change is the

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demolition

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cinema, which has been converted

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pub

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Moreover

, the green space in

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has been pulled down, and

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stadium has been constructed. Another

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striking

change is the construction of

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train station, which enables people to transport easily. On the north-west side of the town, the green space has been replaced by new apartments. Another change has been the knocking down of the factory, and

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softwarecompany

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software company

has been built.

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has been expanded, in order to increase the facilities of the town.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

123 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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