The maps bellow show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps demonstrate recent changes in the town of Kimsville from 2002 until now.

Overall

, There has been a

singnificant

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significant

moderniazation

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modernization

and more amenities

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been added. One interesting change is the

demolitin

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demolition

old

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cinema, which has been converted

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pub

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a pub

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Moreover

, the green space in

south-west

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has been pulled down, and

football

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a football

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stadium has been constructed. Another

strking

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striking

change is the construction of

new

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train station, which enables people to transport easily. On the north-west side of the town, the green space has been replaced by new apartments. Another change has been the knocking down of the factory, and

instead

, the

softwarecompany

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software company

has been built.

Finally

, the shopping

center

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centre

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has been expanded, in order to increase the facilities of the town.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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5 paragraphs

123 words

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development
infrastructure
commercial
residential
renovation
modernization
transportation routes
green space
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community impact
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The maps bellow show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People, who go to live in other countries should follow the customs and tradition of the new country, to what extent to do you agree or disagree?

People believe that some individuals are born with leadership skills, while others think that leadership skills can be made. Discuss both views.

With advancing technology, the development of automated vehicles is becoming reality. In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of self-driving vehicles?