The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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the designation of Anthropology Graduates from the same University. It summarizes the salary of every student for about 5 years. The statistical data has been recorded under five categories of how all the individuals work and it is
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been divided into 3 parts based on their employment. Anthropology Graduates who work full-time
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52
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, the part-timers are 15, 5
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of workers
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under part-time and postgraduates,
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masters students are slightly less than 10, Unemployed are somewhat higher than 10, and the
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who do not come under any of the segment is 8. There are three types of employment which
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been recorded under different salary
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. Freelancing
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get the minimum salary of 5 and the
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rise to 40. The maximum of Government employers is 50 and the
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companies is 30.
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