The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The bar chart illustrates data about the percentage of males and females major
use
with regard to 8 different activities on the
internet
for 12 months in Slovakia.
Overall
,
it is clear that
women
spend more time on the
internet
than
men
for various purposes.
While
women
mainly
use
the
internet
for email,
men
show interest in text or instant messaging. As can be seen from the chart, females
use
more
internet
banking than males, which was nearly 80% and 70%. What’s more, health research accounted for three-fifths
in
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the female, streaming video music category, which is double the
use
of
men
. The same trend was observed in Online education, Social networking and email, the proportion of females outweighs males. As regards remaining data, the figure for job hunting activity witnessed the same number of
men
and
women
usage, which is one-fifth. Text messages contained over 80% in both genders,
women
are slightly higher than
men
. For the
use
of email,
this
activity has the highest proportion of human
use
in Slovakia,
Women
and
men
constitute nearly 90% and over 80% respectively.
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