Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
As a student, you have the right to choose your own path, especially when talking about study-related.
However
, some point
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points
stated
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state
students
need to take courses, such
as science and technology
that are beneficial for the future
. I will discuss both perspectives and points supporting my belief in this
essay.
Firstly
, let
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letting
students
choose and plan their future
is essential. We can’t speculate the future
and there is a chance that their courses and jobs will be beneficial. Moreover
, for example
, if they face some difficulties in their study or workplace, they will have a
motivation to solve it as it is their own will that they may like. Seeing society nowadays, it is noticeable that more people are aiming to have a “work-life balance”, Change the article
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therefore
they can live more
enjoyable and less stressful life.
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Secondly
, the development of technology
are
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has
increase
very fast. If Wrong verb form
increased
students
were instructed to choose courses related to technology
, it will for sure have a great impact for
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on
future
. However
, something must be consider
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be considered
is
the advantages sometimes do not outweigh the disadvantages. During their study, I think, it depends on their motivation. If they are in Unnecessary verb
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the
situation that Correct article usage
a
lack
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lacks
of
motivation, they tend to not finish their study well. Though Remove the preposition
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technology
are
developing very fast, there is still a chance that artificial intelligence can replace Change the verb form
is
human
.
In conclusion, I prefer that Fix the agreement mistake
humans
students
must choose their path by themselves as there may be several drawbacks if they are restricted. In my opinion, let students
plan, and adults can give some advice to them, but not instructed
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instruct
Therefore
, they can develop well and more
motivated when problems come.Add a missing verb
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your arguments are clearly presented and supported with relevant examples. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea and provide evidence or explanations to back it up.
Task Response
In the introduction, clearly state the topic and your opinion. In the body, develop both sides of the discussion with detailed points that are logically connected to each other and to your overall argument. Then, reiterate your opinion in the conclusion for clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices and transitions to link sentences and paragraphs together more effectively. This will enhance the overall flow of your essay.
Task Response
Provide specific and relevant examples to illustrate your points. These examples can be drawn from your own knowledge or experience, or from recognized studies and research.