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the given graph shows the kain source of energy for USA in 1980 to 1990

the given graph shows the kain source of energy for USA in 1980 to 1990
#kain #source #energy #usa
The pie
chard
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chart
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 given provides information about energy
production
 from different
source
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sources
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 between1980
and
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apply
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1990 in
USA
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the USA
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Overall
, oil constituted the main resource of
energi
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energy
production
 in both years,
while
 hydroelectric
power
producted
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produced
 the least
energi
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energy
. There was
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a slighly
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slighly
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slight
increased
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increase
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 in
production
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the production
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 of nuclear
power
 and coal.
According to
 the data, the amount of oil
production
 in the USA accounted
42
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% in 1980 and dropped to 33% in 1990. The proportion of energy from hydroelectric
power
 , on the
otther
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other
 hand,
remain
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remained
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 constant in both
year
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years
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 were similar at 5%. The
energi
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energy
 generated by natural gas, which was the second major source of
energi
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energy
 in the USA in 1980, fell by 1 % to a quarter of all
energi
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energy
 produced in 1990.
In contrast
,
production
 by coal went up from 225 to 27% in 1990.
Whereas
 there was a 5% rise in
energi
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energy
 from nuclear
power
 to reach 10% in the second year.
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