The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps tell us about the Norbiton industrial

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and the prospects for its future development. One significant alteration is that all factories that currently occupy the industrial zone will be replaced by housing areas complemented by a shopping

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, a playground, a school and a medical centre. Today’s Norbiton industrial

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is bordered by a river and farmland in the north and a nearby town in the west. All factories are located on the southern side of the river alongside the main arteries and

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that intersect with the roads towards the main entrance of the

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. The industrial park is

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connected by a highway that leads to a nearby town. In the future, the intersection in the main entrance of the

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will be replaced by a smaller roundabout with shops and a nearby medical

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. The main roundabout inside the

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will get two adjacent roads going north and northwest respectively. There will be a housing

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north of the river and adjacent to the main roads. A playground and school will be located at the intersection going north of the main road and on the east side of the

area

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respectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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