The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The following diagram illustrates
that
how families in one country spent Correct word choice
apply
money
Correct article usage
the money
which
they Correct pronoun usage
apply
earn
per Wrong verb form
earned
a
week in 1968 and in 2018.It is obvious in 1968 Correct article usage
apply
family
have more attention than other things.
Fix the agreement mistake
families
According to
the bar chart, In 1968 people used 35 percent of their income for food but in 2018 they spent nearly three_ quarters
of their money for food. In 2018, families Correct your spelling
three-quarters
prefered
to Correct your spelling
preferred
spent
their revenue Change the form of the verb
spend
for
Change preposition
on
entertainments
, Fix the agreement mistake
entertainment
20
Correct word choice
and 20
percent
of their revenue Change the spelling
per cent
was belonged
to their spare Change to the active voice
belonged
times
. Fix the agreement mistake
time
However
, In 1968 people spent slightly less than 10 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
for
their Change preposition
on
entertainments
. Fix the agreement mistake
entertainment
Furthermore
, they pay
attention more Wrong verb form
paid
for
housing in 2018 than Change preposition
to
1968
.
Change preposition
in 1968
overall
, the below chart demonstrates that
how families organize their weekly income for other things, Correct word choice
apply
such
as housing, food or
Correct word choice
apply
their
leisure etc.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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