The line graph grap illustrates the changes in employment trends over a period of 70 years in the United States
This
line chart above shows us the transformation that exist
Wrong verb form
existed
throughout
1975 to 2025 in three different jobs Change preposition
from
such
as manufacturing, services
, and agriculture in the United States
Overall
, we can see that services
and manufacturing has
a similar and Correct subject-verb agreement
have
a
relatively low starting point. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, agriculture starts the year with a high point before experiencing a decline towards 2025. Three of the job types met at an equilibrium in 1980 before having their own adjustments.
Manufacturing and services
has
a beginning point of just around 10 and Wrong verb form
had
has
a corresponding change throughout the years before breaking its similar growth in 1980. Wrong verb form
had
Moreover
, services
has
a steady growth to an Wrong verb form
had
all time
high in 2025, Add a hyphen
all-time
while
manufacturing only had its highest record on
1980 before diminishing to 10 points.
Change preposition
in
In addition
, agriculture starts at its peak at 80 points then
has a consistent decline throughout then
ending the graph to 10 points.Submitted by aizawatakeru2 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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