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The line graph grap illustrates the changes in employment trends over a period of 70 years in the United States

The line graph grap illustrates the changes in employment trends over a period of 70 years in the United States
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This
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 line chart above shows us the transformation that
exist
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existed
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throughout
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from
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 1975 to 2025 in three different jobs
such
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 as manufacturing,
services
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, and agriculture in the United States
Overall
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, we can see that
services
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 and manufacturing
has
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have
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 a similar and
a
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apply
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relatively low starting point.
On the other hand
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, agriculture starts the year with a high point before experiencing a decline towards 2025. Three of the job types met at an equilibrium in 1980 before having their own adjustments. Manufacturing and
services
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has
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had
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 a beginning point of just around 10 and
has
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had
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 a corresponding change throughout the years before breaking its similar growth in 1980.
Moreover
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,
services
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has
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had
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 a steady growth to an
all time
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 high in 2025,
while
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 manufacturing only had its highest record
on
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in
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 1980 before diminishing to 10 points.
In addition
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, agriculture starts at its peak at 80 points
then
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 has a consistent decline throughout
then
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 ending the graph to 10 points.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • employment trends
  • period of 70 years
  • United States
  • changes
  • trends
  • overview
  • patterns
  • initial changes
  • significant shifts
  • impact
  • economic factors
  • findings
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