Queen Mary Hospital The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps depict the alterations taking place in Queen Mary Hospital
had
changed, every 20 years. By and large, the hospital remained in the same position Unnecessary verb
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along
the period, Change preposition
during
while
the features focused more on providing education functions and developing a cancer centre
.
As for the major changes in 1960 - 1980 of the hospital, the hospital greatly focused on deconstructing the shopping centre
and farmland. Shopping
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The shopping
centre
was located west of the hospital,
and was replaced by a cancer Remove the comma
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centre
and pharmacy. In addition
, the farmland below the shopping centre
was changed into where the nurses study.
Compared to the 1980 to 2000 era, the cancer centre
which was located at the west hospital was expanded into a bigger building like the letter of L that is
still on the left side replacing the nursing school. However
, the car park in the north area of the hospital was divided in
two sections, Change the preposition
into
nursing
school and Correct article usage
the nursing
car
park itself.Add an article
the car
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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