Some people think that the government should provide free public libraries in every town, while others think this is a waste of money because people can get access the information on the internet. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

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modern
generation
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generation,

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few
individual
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individuals

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believed
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believe

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that the
authority
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authorities

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should
fixed
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fix

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free
libraries
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in every city.
As
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On

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other
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the other

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hand,
other
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others

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viewed
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view

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that it is a waste of money since
individual
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individuals

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can access the internet at home to obtain information.I completely agree because
libraries
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is
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are

The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject libraries. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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one of
that
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those

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kind
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kinds

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of
building
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buildings

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where students can easily find the collection of
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book
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books

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,periodicals,and
sometime
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sometimes

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entertinment
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entertainment

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also
Linking Words

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.It
help
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helps

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to
shaping
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shape

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the mind of
people
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.
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Library
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The library
A library

The noun phrase Library seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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plays significant
roles
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role

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in each and every
person
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person's

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life because most of the youth of
country
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the country

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like to utilize their spare
time
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in
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library
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the library

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.They found their abundant of
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book
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books

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like history,General knowledge
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book
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books

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, Biography of different
well know
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well-known

The word well know doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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person
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people

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and so on..
People
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find their
atmospher
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atmosphere

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very
tranquili
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tranquil

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yet
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theri
Correct your spelling
there
their

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is no
any
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apply

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obstacle in reading
time
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.Someone reche
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theri
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there
their

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to make their mind refreshment.Different
profession
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professional

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sector person came
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theri
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there

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to research their own subject matter
..
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.
...

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Beside
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Besides

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this
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also
Linking Words

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,Free of cost
difference
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different

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types of
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book
Fix the agreement mistake
books

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is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are

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accessable
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accessible

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their it
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they

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help
that
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those

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kind
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kinds

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of
people
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who have economic conditions
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is
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are

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not stable.
For instance
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,
individual
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individuals

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easily find each and every
book
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in
market
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the market

The noun phrase market seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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but
it’s
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its

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price is unaffordable at the same
time
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that same
book
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they may find in
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library
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the library

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Linking Words

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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

also
Add a missing verb
is also

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without
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apply

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free of cost so
in
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for

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this
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reason most of the
resident
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residents

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of my country prefer to
established
Wrong verb form
establish

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of
library
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.
similary
Correct your spelling
Similarly

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, Having
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
a library
libraries

The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun libraries in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.

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libraries
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in every town is
pleasure
Add an article
a pleasure

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because most of the
learner
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learners

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get opportunities to obtain quality
of
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apply

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education
Rephrase
apply

There may be an adverb issue here.

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also
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. On the flipside,more
people
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discussed
is
Unnecessary verb
apply

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that
libraries
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is
Change the verb form
are

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not crucial because in
this
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current scenario every
where
Correct your spelling
there

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theri is
Verb problem
are

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amenities of wifi so
where ever
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wherever

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they need different information
like
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apply

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related to
educate
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education

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,Political news,ongoing plane of
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the countr
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countr
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country

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,they can easily get from
in
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apply

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online . Anytime involved is social media badly
effect
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affect

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our health
also
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it
made
Wrong verb form
makes

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our
behavior
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behaviour

The spelling of behavior is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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intervort
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interior
interiors

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which they do not easily adjust in
blusting
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bustling

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place.
In different
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Different

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websites
also
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they
Correct pronoun usage
apply

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get
inoff
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off
in off

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studies material but they do not have to enjoy
outer
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the outer

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environment always
time
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sitting at home may affect directly or indirectly mental and physical health
To
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In

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conclusions
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conclusion

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investing
budget
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a budget

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in
libraries
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is not
wastage
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waste

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of money but
also
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it is a place where more information
people
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obtain easily without investing any amount of money

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structure
A clear introduction is vital. Start with a general statement about the topic, then introduce both views, followed by your thesis statement explaining your ultimate position. For the conclusion, succinctly summarize key points and restate your opinion clearly.
structure
To improve in coherence and cohesion, make sure to organize your ideas clearly into paragraphs, each with a single main idea. Use cohesive devices, such as linking words and phrases, to connect ideas and paragraphs smoothly.
language
Pay close attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Mistakes in these areas can make your writing difficult to understand.
development
Expand on the key points with relevant examples or further explanation to strengthen your arguments. Ensure each paragraph contains one clear main idea and several supporting sentences.
vocabulary
Use a wider range of vocabulary to convey your ideas more precisely and avoid repetition. Aim for precision and variety in your word choices.
task response
It's important to fully address the task prompt. Discuss both sides of the argument as instructed, and ensure that your own opinion is clear and supported with reasons and examples.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public libraries
  • physical and digital resources
  • community hubs
  • educational and cultural activities
  • tailored information
  • literacy and lifelong learning
  • costly
  • urgent social needs
  • vast amounts of information
  • readily accessible
  • digitalization
  • under-utilized
  • inefficient use of public funds
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