You have recently been offered a job in Canada living with a family for 6 months and looking after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him/her why do you want this job, explain how you will spend your free time in canada, and invite your friend to visit you when you are in canada
Hello
I’m
writing to apply for the job you placed online and would like to be considered for the nanny job.
I’m
interested in this
job because I have a desire to gain international experience and a love for children. I have years of experience taking care of children of various ages specifically 2 years with infants. I will strictly comply with the rules you already set for your children but am also
still very kind, and gentle, and I will not raise my voice toward your kids. In my free time, I incorporate crafts during my spare time, and I think I can make use of it to spend and teach a thing or two to your kid.
I am curious about Canada and interested in exploring Canadian culture and improving my language skills. I’m
planning to visit natural landscapes, museums, and events in my free time. I believe the possibility of engaging in local community activities and hobbies would also
help me to have a better understanding of Canadian culture.
I am thrilled to try Canadian cuisine and participate in several sports. Having the possibility of my hometown friend coming over to Canada and exploring together excites me too. In terms of accommodation, I think it would be nice to spend a day or two with the family if you allow it, also
it would be nice to have your kid accompanied too.
To conclude
, I believe I’m
a fit candidate for this
position based on the reasons above. I’m
open to further
discussion about this
position. Thankyou
.
Yours faithfully,Correct your spelling
Thank you
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Greeting and Closing
Ensure that the opening and closing salutations are appropriate for the type of letter. In a personal letter to a friend, use less formal greetings such as 'Dear [Friend's Name]' and closings like 'Best regards' or 'Warm wishes.'
Task Achievement
Focus on answering all parts of the prompt clearly. You should tell your friend why you want this particular job, explain how you will spend your free time in Canada, and invite your friend to visit. The original response does not effectively cover these points.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Use clear paragraphing and dedicate each paragraph to a particular subject or topic. Avoid mixing several ideas in one paragraph and ensure that each paragraph includes one central idea related to the question prompt.
Logical Structure
Use a logical structure throughout the letter, entailing an introduction, body paragraphs (each focusing on a different aspect of the prompt), and a conclusion. Use transitional words and phrases to create a smooth flow between paragraphs.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,